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Author: Blimprider  [Dec 5, 2021] Genre(s): Occult :: Crime/Gangster :: Mystery Details: At nearly 19,000 words, this is far longer than most people here seem to like getting into, but if you have a sweet tooth for occult mysteries, you may just find it to your liking. Here's your invitation, in case you'd like to try it out. [Novella]
Author: Roseille ♥  [Dec 2, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Drama Details: The revised opening scene of a science-fantasy novel I'm working on. I know how important first chapters are, so I'm eager to see how it lands for readers and would be extremely grateful for honest feedback. Thanks in advance! [Chapter]
Author: Val O'Ness  [Dec 1, 2021] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Friendship :: Relationship Details: Hello reviewers, I've recently added the first chapter of a short romance novel to my portfolio. Even though it's just a single chapter, I'd love to get some feedback. Would like to know if it captured your interest, and hear your suggestions! [Chapter]
Author: Lurie Park [Nov 30, 2021] Genre(s): How-To/Advice :: Psychology :: Self Help Details: A poem near to my heart. [Poetry]
Author: sarah_sarah_bo_barah [Nov 28, 2021] Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Friendship :: Relationship Details: One-shot fanfic. Please let me know what you think, because this is just a sneak peek for a larger project. Thanks everyone! [Fiction] [Fiction]
Author: Sherasi [Nov 22, 2021] Genre(s): Women's :: Personal :: Medical Details: I am working on a short story or a novelette. I have several excerpts I would like reviewed for content, spelling, changes in the way I might need to write. [Editorial]
Author: Sherasi [Nov 22, 2021] Genre(s): Women's :: Personal :: Medical Details: I am working on a short story or a novelette. I have several excerpts I would like reviewed for content, spelling, changes in the way I might need to write. [Editorial]
Author: shyguy42 [Nov 18, 2021] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Gay/Lesbian Details: Hello again. Looking for advice on fight scene writing in this piece. As well as any other problems you may see. Might expand this into a larger story in the future. [Fiction]
Author: Mark Diaz [Nov 18, 2021] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: None :: None Details: A poem about fire hair girl [Poetry]
Author: Celerityyx [Nov 17, 2021] Genre(s): Dark :: Tragedy :: Supernatural Details: May or may not expand. It has been a long time since I have written anything so feedback is needed to better improve the story and/or writing technique. Your reviews are greatly appreciated and I thank you in advance for taking the time to read it. [Short Story]
Author: Skurpio [Nov 10, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other Details: Opening chapter of new story I've been working on for a bit. Please assist me with constructive reviews. [Chapter]
Author: S.z.kamoonpuri  [Nov 8, 2021] Genre(s): Religious :: Inspirational :: Health Details: 2261442Pleez review with even a one line comment, thanks, [Poetry]
Author: A E Willcox  [Nov 6, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Drama :: Action/Adventure Details: The first chapter of a current work-in-progress. All feedback would be appreciated. I will reward with GPs for all helpful comments and will give a reciprocal review if you want one. [Chapter]
Author: Sorji [Nov 5, 2021] Genre(s): Drama :: Supernatural :: Contest Entry Details: This is a story I wrote for What a Character 10/2021. It's from the point of view of one of John Wayne Gacy's victims. There are dark themes and foul language, but I hope some of you will be willing to check it out. [Short Story]
Author: BoB_618 [Oct 31, 2021] Genre(s): Dark :: Horror/Scary :: Other Details: This is just a paragraph I wrote for Halloween.>> You'll notice the one line I borrowed from Shakespere's ' Macbeth,' it's the witch's chant. << [Fiction]
Author: M. S. Bird [Oct 31, 2021] Genre(s): Supernatural :: Philosophy :: Other Details: Flash fiction inspired by a reddit writing prompt. Another that I believe is near completion. Looking for critique of plot, flow, narrative clarity, emotional impact. Thanks! [Short Story]
Author: M. S. Bird [Oct 31, 2021] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Philosophy :: Other Details: I think this short story is close to being finished. Looking for the emotions/insights it evokes, any wooden dialogue, narrative confusion, or problems with flow. [Short Story]
Author: Graywriter [Oct 30, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Comedy :: Entertainment Details: Seeking critical reviews of the first draft of a work in progress.Please focus on the story - plot, conflict, character, setting, theme. Am I on track? Does this have potential? Please ignore errors in mechanics or grammar, typos, etc. [Fiction]
Author: willy [Oct 30, 2021] Genre(s): Drama :: Other :: Emotional Details: I'm a little disappointed this item has not received much attention. Perhaps it takes a little effort to see how it relates to the modern world but I suggest such effort would be rewarded. [Short Story]
Author: Rehtaeh Daens [Oct 30, 2021] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Family :: Thriller/Suspense Details: Looking for feedback on plot progression, character development, tone/mood, and sensory details. I will accept any feedback aimed at improving my writing, but I tend to struggle with world-building and crafting realistic characters the most. Thank you! [Short Story]
Author: Rehtaeh Daens [Oct 30, 2021] Genre(s): Death :: Family :: Teen Details: Specifically looking for constructive criticism on plot progression, character development, overall reader impression, and sensory details. However, I will accept any feedback so long as it is aimed at improving my writing skills. Thank you! [Short Story]
Author: Beckab50 [Oct 30, 2021] Genre(s): Adult :: Computers :: Entertainment Details: Please review my piece josh and sandy.it needs reviewing .please tell me of any grammar errors or any misspelled words or any punctuation errors thank you. [Short Story]
Author: Author Joseph J. Madden [Oct 29, 2021] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Details: A very personal piece for me. Just looking for opinions [Short Story]
Author: Author Joseph J. Madden [Oct 29, 2021] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Steampunk :: Action/Adventure Details: This is the latest short story based on my novel series The Starhawk Chronicles set about 10 years before the events of the first novel. A bit darker than my usual fare, but it is an important character-growth moment for the main protagonist. [Short Story]
Author: elizjohn [Oct 26, 2021] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Parenting :: Other Details: Just a little something I scribbled today. I would be happy to exhange reviews. Thank you! [Poetry]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Oct 26, 2021] Genre(s): Dark :: Dark :: Dark Details: Please review my story Death World Part 2. Thank you [Fiction]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Oct 26, 2021] Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: Drama Details: Please review my item Death's World. Thank you [Fiction]
Author: Alex Stephens [Oct 25, 2021] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense Details: Need brutal honesty, I plan to release this work independently mid November. [Short Story]
Author: BoB_618 [Oct 21, 2021] Genre(s): Relationship :: Family :: Other Details: Just looking for a basic critique -- Nothing fancy ! [Essay]
Author: ruwth  [Oct 16, 2021] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Experience :: Biographical Details: Auto-award of about 1000 gift points... [Non-fiction]
Author: PureSciFiPlus  [Oct 13, 2021] Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Medical Details: I think that this is one of the best short stories that I have written. If it’s not the best one. But it’s not my opinion that counts. It’s yours. [Short Story]
Author: J.M. Arlen [Oct 11, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Other Details: does the opening hook you? Does it make you want to read more? Why or why not? [Chapter]
Author: NicTales [Oct 11, 2021] Genre(s): Dark :: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense Details: I'm looking for critiques on the first chapter of my current manuscript - any notes you can give are helpful. [Chapter]
Author: Graywriter [Oct 9, 2021] Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: Contest Entry Details: What do you think of the unusual rhyme scheme - is it effective, too subtle, what? Interested in how poem affects the reader, interpretation of theme, etc.Thanks in advance. [Poetry]
Author: J. Robert Kane [Oct 5, 2021] Genre(s): Entertainment :: Horror/Scary :: Psychology Details: Adding some content to my website for Halloween. Any suggestions, stylistic or substantive are welcome and appreciated! [Article]
Author: Grieving_Girl [Sep 29, 2021] Genre(s): Teen :: Emotional :: Nonsense Details: This is just a collection of the poems I've written and I want to know what I did well on and what I can improve on. [Poetry]
Author: DaOr [Sep 24, 2021] Genre(s): Friendship :: Supernatural :: Emotional Details: Based on real incidents ;)Want a nice review from someone who can decode this poem. [Monologue]
Author: LuniSolar [Sep 23, 2021] Genre(s): Drama :: Inspirational :: Relationship Details: I believe this could be done better. I'm not sure I have the words right. Any guidance would be appreciated. [Poetry]
Author: S D Ballentyne [Sep 19, 2021] Genre(s): Satire :: Comedy :: Political Details: This is a parody satire song "I Voted Trump (and I liked it)" to the tune of Katy Perry's "I Kissed A Girl (and I liked it)". Sarcasm levels are extremely high and may possibly damage your health. [Lyrics]
Author: PennyInPocket [Sep 12, 2021] Genre(s): Comedy :: Nonsense :: Entertainment Details: Updated an old story. I hope you enjoy [Short Story]
Author: Dee [Sep 2, 2021] Genre(s): Mystery :: History :: Family Details: I'm looking for feedback on this newly revised/reworked short story. It has a completely different ending from previous drafts. [Short Story]
Author: Joto-Kai [Aug 31, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Romance/Love :: Occult Details: Love binds Elisha's spirit to the earth. As the weight of haunting gathers, can the studious Voltaire hold back his tears long enough to persuade her to save herself? [Appendix]
Author: Melody Cadence Clark [Aug 31, 2021] Genre(s): Emotional :: Romance/Love :: Relationship Details: Would love feedback, opinions, thoughts and feelings on this poem I wrote today about someone I've never really stopped loving [Poetry]
Author: Perhaps [Aug 22, 2021] Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Philosophy Details: :) [Poetry]
Author: Perhaps [Aug 22, 2021] Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History Details: Worth the read") [Poetry]
Author: PureSciFi  [Aug 18, 2021] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Mystery :: Drama Details: Nathum may be in the leader of the community below. But Patrinna is in control of that Research and Observation site. If anything goes wrong there, it’s her fault. And something big has happened there. [Fiction]
Author: Nine [Aug 16, 2021] Genre(s): Friendship :: Writing :: Friendship Details: Please help me improve with your honest reviews and suggestions [Poetry]
Author: Temujin [Aug 14, 2021] Genre(s): Cultural :: War :: Other Details: Flash Fiction. Is it any good? [Fiction]
Author: Nine [Aug 14, 2021] Genre(s): Writing.Com :: Writing :: Other Details: Tried something new. Please help me with your reviews and suggestions. [Poetry]
Author: Zachary Wright [Aug 8, 2021] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Supernatural Details: This is a version of the first chapter of the book I've been trying to write and possibly publish. Any and all reviews are welcome. Don't be afraid to be critical because I want this book to do well once I can finally publish it. [Chapter]
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