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Author: Mark Diaz  [May 27, 2022] Genre(s): Psychology :: Dark :: Other Details: A flash-fiction I wrote [Short Story]
Author: A Penguin Simulacrum of Steven  [May 27, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Death Details: Does this work? Simple, really. [Short Story]
Author: Talia Foxtail [May 23, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other Details: Creative nonfiction. I would like to know if the storytelling flows, the pacing is appropriate, and the story itself is engaging. The nuts and bolts of grammar and punctuation can be tweeked later, unless something is so egregious it ruins the piece. [Chapter]
Author: Leslie Loo [May 21, 2022] Genre(s): Animal :: Children's :: Contest Entry Details: This is a story that I wrote six years ago. Check it out and let me know what you think. Also, tell me how I can improve the ending because to me, I'm not currently satisfied with it. Thanks! [Fiction]
Author: D-Angel222 [May 19, 2022] Genre(s): Comedy :: Dark :: Entertainment Details: Hello, perfectly good stranger reading this.Click here and see if I can make you laugh. Go on, what have you got to lose? Time? Patience? Sanity!? Ok, they're all good reasons, but c'mon take a gamble on a newbie, please :) [Monologue]
Author: Cat Carroll  [May 12, 2022] Genre(s): Dark :: Supernatural :: Gothic Details: Hello! Please let me know if this works well or is too "fan-like" of Edgar Allan Poe's works. I chose to give those two well-known poems (The Raven & Annabel Lee) twists of my own along with my interpretation in a new poem. Thanks, dears! [Poetry]
Author: Tileira [May 10, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural Details: Looking for feedback on this to help me strengthen the development of the romantic connection and characterization and information the next part [Short Story]
Author: Flower [May 5, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love :: Dark Details: This is my second poem, its about a toxic relationship, I'd love for some feedback, if possible. [Poetry]
Author: Daffodil Washburn [May 4, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Thriller/Suspense :: Action/Adventure Details: Hello! I'd appreciate any feedback you have to give me!(It's still a work in progress so if you have any helpful plot tips I would be beyond grateful!) :) [Fiction]
Author: Sand Castles Shopgirl 739  [Apr 23, 2022] Genre(s): Mystery :: History :: Other Details: Originally thought to be a preface, but am now torn between preface or chapter. This side story arose from a character sketch. The "parting gift" became a short story on its own. Not sure how to proceed here. Suggestions, please!! [Fiction]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Philosophy Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Cat Carroll [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Supernatural Details: Hello! This is my first attempt at prose poetry, a genre I adore. It's a horror/supernatural poem about creation, monsters, and something from within that engulfs us... Please let me know about its strengths and weaknesses :). Thanks! [Poetry]
Author: Larisa McGrath [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Young Adult :: Women's Details: If this first chapter is not a good hook, what can I do to change that? What would inspire you all to keep reading? What do you expect to see in a solid first chapter? I feel like something is missing, but cannot put my finger on what. Please help. [Draft]
Author: ponkacheese [Apr 10, 2022] Genre(s): Writing :: Medical :: Environment Details: Enjoy and let me know what you think. =) [Poetry]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Apr 7, 2022] Genre(s): Contest :: Dark :: Entertainment Details: An honest review would be very much appreciated. Thank you! [Fiction]
Author: Nine [Apr 6, 2022] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Romance/Love :: Writing.Com Details: This is something close to my heart since it was written for my favorite person who inspires me. Please review this work and help me learn and make it more beautiful with your suggestons. [Poetry]
Author: Benjamin Black [Apr 5, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Horror/Scary :: Ghost Details: Honest feedback, editing errors, grammar etc needed. Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. [Short Story]
Author: Joto-Kai [Apr 4, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other Details: Can Voltaire protect Elisha if she is determined to face their deadly one-time student that is corrupting the world about him?[Prose]
Author: John used to be Trinoir [Mar 31, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Entertainment :: Fantasy Details: I would like feedback on my first chapter. It is short but contains all the information the reader needs regarding the back story of the superpowers.Thank you for taking your time and reading. [Draft]
Author: Laura Ellen Carr  [Mar 31, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Mystery :: Other Details: Please review the first chapter of my book please, I need to know if I am on the right path. Please give me your honest opinion. [Novel]
Author: Sand Castles Shopgirl 739 [Mar 30, 2022] Genre(s): Nature :: Experience :: Environment Details: Our local library is running a poetry contest to celebrate Poetry Month in April. Rules included line limitation, nothing vulgar or profane. The main request is, the writing should appeal to everyone, no matter the age. [Poetry]
Author: BIG BAD WOLF  [Mar 28, 2022] Genre(s): Writing :: Fantasy :: Other Details: My new addition, Advice of a Werewolf could use some reviews. Warning - content is of a nature that could offend some people. That being said, other additions could use reviews. [Handbook]
Author: RickyZ [Mar 28, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: War Details: The epoch continues, and the Royal king approaches. Any and all feedback and suggestions are greatly appreciated. Particularly interesting in character representation and believability. Thank you for your consideration, and enjoy. [Chapter]
Author: 🤍RookieTea🤍  [Mar 23, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Teen :: Drama Details: I want straight forward reviews. I don't care so much for fluff, though I do like praise were earned. Thank you! [Novel]
Author: PureSciFi  [Mar 23, 2022] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Drama Details: I don’t think that I have made any mistakes in this Science Faction Short Story. But I wouldn’t be surprised if I did. Especially, when it comes to my tenses. Knowing about them would help me a lot. [Short Story]
Author: Clare Kennedy [Mar 20, 2022] Genre(s): Mythology :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Details: After some really helpful feedback, I've made some significant adjustments to my first chapter. It is the start of a fantasy saga and whilst inspired by Norse mythology, the world and everything within it, is entirely my own work. [Fiction]
Author: Mark Diaz [Mar 17, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: None :: None Details: A poem about Fire Hair Girl (1 minute read) [Poetry]
Author: PureSciFiPlus  [Mar 16, 2022] Genre(s): Western :: Action/Adventure :: Drama Details: I’m not very good when it comes to Westerns. I like Westerns a whole lot. Especially, Televisions and Movies. But I prefer lasers and spaceships to bows and arrows aka cowboys and Indians. [Short Story]
Author: Ruthie4u [Feb 27, 2022] Genre(s): Family :: Experience :: Parenting Details: Appreciate your feedback on the story and it's progression. I'd like to know if it's readable, understandable and interesting. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: Ruthie4u [Feb 27, 2022] Genre(s): Family :: Parenting :: Relationship Details: Appreciate if you could let me know, how the story flows and the ways things are worded or described needs to be worked on. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: RickyZ [Feb 25, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: War Details: A beginning to an epic. We all must start somewhere. Requesting any and all reviews and feedback! Thank you all in advance! [Chapter]
Author: Daisan [Feb 25, 2022] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Drama :: Other Details: First draft of a segment I'm working into story as part of a two-three chapter arc in the narrative. Critiques/recommendations (provided they're constructive). Working on subtle movement and dialogue to push narrative. [Fiction]
Author: Jimmy E. Durham, RN-BC [Feb 23, 2022] Genre(s): Comedy :: Satire :: Friendship Details: Looking for thoughts on this collection. Does it work as a collection? Or is it a novel possibility? []
Author: Jimmy E. Durham, RN-BC [Feb 23, 2022] Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Emotional Details: Just looking for some new perspectives. What works, what doesn't? [Short Story]
Author: The Puppet Master  [Feb 22, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Political :: Religious Details: Would appreciate some feedback on this, thanks [Fiction]
Author: Sorji [Feb 22, 2022] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Action/Adventure :: Other Details: Looking for some input on my contest entry! Thanks! [Short Story]
Author: Victor L. Rolling Jr. [Feb 21, 2022] Genre(s): Gay/Lesbian :: Romance/Love :: Contest Details: Hello,Looking for a review on context not just content. V/R Vick [Short Story]
Author: Victor L. Rolling Jr. [Feb 21, 2022] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Contest :: Gay/Lesbian Details: Hello,Looking for a review of this piece. V/R Vick [Short Story]
Author: willy [Feb 20, 2022] Genre(s): Experience :: Comedy :: Biographical Details: A very short poem of loss and love. [Poetry]
Author: SSpark [Feb 7, 2022] Genre(s): Family :: Death :: Inspirational Details: I would love to have feedback regarding what I can do to make this piece better. Is the ending too abrupt? It started out as a memory and morphed into a tribute. [Non-fiction]
Author: Tileira [Feb 1, 2022] Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Drama Details: I'm putting this back on my project list for revision. I'm looking to collect open feedback on it as it stands now to inform a rewrite. [Short Story]
Author: graybabe [Feb 1, 2022] Genre(s): Entertainment :: Romance/Love :: Relationship Details: I have a story I'd like someone to review. It's called Seurat Meeting.Thank you very much! [Draft]
Author: LorenIsOneOfMyNames  [Jan 28, 2022] Genre(s): Mythology :: Death :: Tragedy Details: Just under 500 words, please review! This story is a short snippet that I'm looking for feedback on :)Many thanks in advance :) [Fiction]
Author: Tiberius [Jan 23, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Supernatural Details: Please give me your honest thoughts, where I can improve, and what I could do differently! I'm looking for feedback that helps improve the story and such [Short Story]
Author: Averren [Jan 23, 2022] Genre(s): Contest :: Death :: Emotional Details: Please review this contest entry for me. [Fiction]
Author: Supersonic has Pac-Man Fever! [Jan 21, 2022] Genre(s): Supernatural :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy Details: Looking for reviews so I can keep improving this story. I am offering GPs for reviews! [Chapter]
Author: Niquole Abram [Jan 21, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Thriller/Suspense Details: This is my first dabble into the horror genre. I would love to know what you think about it and welcome any and all constructive suggestions. [Short Story]
Author: Charlie Carrol [Jan 18, 2022] Genre(s): Experience :: Relationship :: Religious Details: Stream of consciousness style poem all feedback appreciated :) [Poetry]
Author: monarch_love [Jan 18, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Emotional :: Nonsense Details: This is where I publish most of the poems I write and I would really appreciate any reviews and/or feedback to help me improve my work! :) [Poetry]
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