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![]() ![]() ![]() As the Title Description says, a sickness had taken over the planet of Jooflin. Their solution to stopping it was to use Time Travel to stop it from ever happening, and they were using humans to do it.
![]() posted: Jan 27, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Can you help me make this a winning entry? All feedback will be greatly appreciated!
![]() posted: Jan 23, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Stream of consciousness/prose style poetry. Any feedback appreciated! :)
![]() posted: Jan 20, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Worth your time.
![]() posted: Jan 20, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please review
![]() posted: Jan 13, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() A published author & playwright, I'm trying my hand at being a Romance Novelist. I've written an 85,000 word piece called "Words of Love~The Odyssey of Sal & Selia". This 6,174 word work is Chapter 1. Please give it a brutally honest, constructive review!
![]() posted: Jan 13, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. I'm hoping for some feedback on a prologue chapter to a longer work of dark, gothic fantasy. 3400 words.
![]() posted: Jan 8, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() I've created a story based on an experience of a dream. I appreciate your review and your opinions of my written dream.
![]() posted: Jan 4, 2023 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for feedback.
![]() posted: Dec 31, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for any and all critical comments for this story. It's the first I've finished in over a year!!! I am happy to review your works as well!
![]() posted: Dec 30, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for a beta reader. I want this story to be cohesive and well written. Thanks for your time.
![]() posted: Dec 27, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() A young husband feels out of place in his village of peasants and longs for a magical life. He turns to the dangerous neighbor in the necropolis.
![]() posted: Dec 21, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for feedback on the story, more so than grammar and mechanics.
![]() posted: Dec 20, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I worked hard on a poignant and powerful imagery to convey the main themes of my poem titled "Splendor". Please let me know if it is strong enough, and what you like and dislike about it? Thank you!
![]() posted: Dec 18, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() How are they doing?
![]() posted: Dec 15, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Yanica was a seventy-five-foot Kovinan that came alive every three hundred years to challenge the Kovinans living on her Land Mass. If they can survive her challenge, they can continue living there. That year they think that they can do it.
![]() posted: Dec 14, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Just wrote a short story for a blog post series. Reviews and critique about effectiveness in story-telling would be appreciated.
![]() posted: Dec 14, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() * Is the protagonist engaging, distinctive and interesting, with a clear goal? * Is the conflict (internal and external) clear and believable? * Does the outcome clearly result from the protagonists strengths/weaknesses/actions Thanks in advance.
![]() posted: Dec 14, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Brand new genre for me. Looking to make sure I'm spoon feeding character background and not forcing it down. Also, obviously, does the tone match the regency romance genre?
![]() posted: Dec 4, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Curious about reactions to the plot and ending. I really worked on the characterization here--was it effective? NOT looking for comments about mechanics, punctuation etc.
![]() posted: Dec 1, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() .Story of the child who created light.
![]() posted: Nov 24, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please be transparent.
![]() posted: Nov 19, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please review my free form poem. Thanks
![]() posted: Nov 14, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, could I please get some feedback on this?
![]() posted: Nov 6, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() The latest tale in my On Dragons Wings saga, introducing some new characters into the fold. The first three tales can also be found in my portfolio
![]() posted: Nov 5, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Just looking for feedback on this, the first chapter in my latest WIP. There is also a prologue available to read (and review?) as well in my portfolio.
![]() posted: Nov 5, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please, review this. Tell me how I did!
![]() posted: Nov 3, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for some reviews for my more recent entries.
![]() posted: Oct 30, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Happy Halloween! How about reading about a spooky radio?
![]() posted: Oct 29, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking for feedback on the first chapter of my book. I'm most curious to know how good a "hook" it is. And because this is a translation, I would like your opinion on the quality of the English text. Thank you!
![]() posted: Oct 24, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() I have rewritten the first draft. I am looking for reviews before continuing with the plot. Thank you!
![]() posted: Oct 15, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Lighthearted (they survive) Faerietale Romeo and Juliet. Monster heroine {or hero?) I did first develop a culture. Looking for any feedback, and sensitivity readers/sensitivity opinions solicited. DNF reviews included. Tell me I've my head where it...
![]() posted: Oct 13, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() this is about my thoughts of someone that i may be wasting my time. but how to stop it from continuing, is another "story" to be told at another time.
![]() posted: Oct 8, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() A sci-fi short story, intended to be a kind of Twilight Zone feel. Interested in feedback on plot, pace, and whether the story and characters are credible and engaging.
![]() posted: Oct 3, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please let me know what you think. This is an ongoing book, I hope to publish.
![]() posted: Oct 2, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Just an exercise in tone and effective use of omniscient narration. I want to know if it's effectively conveying the mood and enhancing the back and forth exchange. Constructive critique requested.
![]() posted: Sep 27, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for feedback on the story, characters as well as where prose can be improved.
![]() posted: Sep 26, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() All comments/help welcomed and appreciated.
![]() posted: Sep 17, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Over the years my writing has covered many themes. I love poetry, short stories, novels. I do not have a favorite style if I can call it that. I would just like to know if my thoughts can be relatable. I am braced for any feedback.
![]() posted: Sep 15, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Just a few words will do. Is it any good? Does it need amending? Is there a fun message in it? Any honest opinions welcomed Brian Pontypridd Wales
![]() posted: Sep 8, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Science Fiction. Please review with constructive critical comments.
![]() posted: Sep 3, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Honest opinions. Whatever you thought, tell me. I just thank you for reading it!
![]() posted: Sep 2, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Could you please review? Thanks,!
![]() posted: Aug 30, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first chapter of a planned longer work. Please let me know of any typos, errors, or anything else. I appreciate all the help I can get. I'm new to writing in general.
![]() posted: Aug 28, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please review this story of mine for its interest and flow. Any and all suggestions and thoughts are welcome. Thank you!!
![]() posted: Aug 28, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Appreciate the feedback.
![]() posted: Aug 25, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() I've edited a poem written during the first covid lock-down, hope it stirs some memories for you
![]() posted: Aug 21, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Back again, I would love to hear peoples thoughts on this one.
![]() posted: Aug 20, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() Hello again I would be delighted if you could review this to please :)
![]() posted: Aug 19, 2022 ![]() ![]() ![]() I have been a storyteller for decades and want to transition into becoming a writer. This is an attempt to work on the dialog.
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