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Author: Daisan  [Sep 27, 2022] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Mystery :: Other Details: Just an exercise in tone and effective use of omniscient narration. I want to know if it's effectively conveying the mood and enhancing the back and forth exchange. Constructive critique requested. [Fiction]
Author: Surgec [Sep 26, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Other Details: Looking for feedback on the story, characters as well as where prose can be improved. [Fiction]
Author: Steven (Penguins > Halloween)  [Sep 24, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Family :: Other Details: The main thing: does it engage the reader? (Please note: Australianisms abound in speling, slang, etc.) [Chapter]
Author: Marrikasala [Sep 17, 2022] Genre(s): Women's :: Comedy :: Cultural Details: All comments/help welcomed and appreciated. [Poetry]
Author: Marrikasala [Sep 15, 2022] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Self Help :: Experience Details: Over the years my writing has covered many themes. I love poetry, short stories, novels. I do not have a favorite style if I can call it that. I would just like to know if my thoughts can be relatable. I am braced for any feedback. [Poetry]
Author: Andrew W [Sep 13, 2022] Genre(s): Adult :: Dark :: Fantasy Details: I am looking for feedback on the content more so than on spelling and grammar. [Short Story]
Author: Andrew W [Sep 12, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: History :: Military Details: I am looking for feedback on the content more so, than on spelling and grammar. [Short Story]
Author: Mark Diaz [Sep 10, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other Details: The first chapter of my book about the characters omnipower, omnipresence, and omniscience. [Fiction]
Author: mix n match [Sep 8, 2022] Genre(s): Cultural :: Writing.Com :: Computers Details: Just a few words will do. Is it any good? Does it need amending? Is there a fun message in it? Any honest opinions welcomedBrian Pontypridd Wales [Poetry]
Author: JJR2 [Sep 3, 2022] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Contest Entry :: Horror/Scary Details: Science Fiction. Please review with constructive critical comments. [Fiction]
Author: BlakeFran3 [Sep 2, 2022] Genre(s): Philosophy :: Experience :: Nonsense Details: Honest opinions. Whatever you thought, tell me. I just thank you for reading it! [Essay]
Author: Scotty1615 [Aug 30, 2022] Genre(s): Philosophy :: Arts :: Cultural Details: Could you please review? Thanks,! [Poetry]
Author: Weaveroftalltales [Aug 28, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Crime/Gangster :: Other Details: This is the first chapter of a planned longer work. Please let me know of any typos, errors, or anything else. I appreciate all the help I can get. I'm new to writing in general. [Fiction]
Author: Ruthie4u [Aug 28, 2022] Genre(s): Emotional :: Community :: Family Details: Please review this story of mine for its interest and flow. Any and all suggestions and thoughts are welcome. Thank you!! [Fiction]
Author: Lucinda Lynx [Aug 25, 2022] Genre(s): Women's :: Other :: None Details: Some of those who have read this on other forums have told me the discussion between characters doesn't sound natural. I have changed this many times. Does the discussion sound natural now? [Prose]
Author: SpookyBee  [Aug 25, 2022] Genre(s): Supernatural :: Contest Entry :: Young Adult Details: Appreciate the feedback. [Short Story]
Author: willy [Aug 21, 2022] Genre(s): Experience :: Personal :: Psychology Details: I've edited a poem written during the first covid lock-down, hope it stirs some memories for you [Poetry]
Author: Sammy [Aug 20, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: None :: None Details: Back again, I would love to hear peoples thoughts on this one. [Poetry]
Author: Sammy [Aug 19, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: None :: None Details: Hello again I would be delighted if you could review this to please :) [Poetry]
Author: Charley [Aug 8, 2022] Genre(s): Comedy :: None :: None Details: I have been a storyteller for decades and want to transition into becoming a writer. This is an attempt to work on the dialog. [Fiction]
Author: lee. [Aug 8, 2022] Genre(s): Emotional :: Self Help :: None Details: I appreciate insight. [Poetry]
Author: Scotty1615 [Jul 31, 2022] Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Drama Details: Please review. [Short Story]
Author: SSpark [Jul 26, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Family :: Other Details: One of the more humorous memories from my childhood. Part of a collections of memories, and all characters have been introduced. Nanny and Pappaw are my grandparents, Belita and Tina my cousins, Dee Dee and Katy my sisters. [Short Story]
Author: VanillaSoftArt  [Jul 25, 2022] Genre(s): Erotica :: Teen :: Fanfiction Details: I gave myself a challenge to write an erotic story under 1.5K words, set in the MLP universe. I'd like to know strengths and weaknesses of this submission for the future. [Fiction]
Author: lezismore-moreislez [Jul 19, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Nature Details: Decided to give the Fantasy genre a go. Any feedback would be most appreciated. Thanks [Serial]
Author: Vixey Todd [Jul 18, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Erotica :: Adult Details: Please provide constructive feedback. [Novel]
Author: Joto-Kai [Jul 18, 2022] Genre(s): Spiritual :: Hobby/Craft :: Inspirational Details: In this short (298 words currently) Melvin nearly misses the point of his trip to the beach. Will a misfired goal and a foolish purchase derail his weekend or set him off to become what he wishes? Also: should I change to 3PL from 1st? Query for GPs [Short Story]
Author: PureSciFiPlus  [Jul 16, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Family :: Drama Details: Just finished creating my Short Story about a girl named Grace who is about to turn sixteen. And she wants to get her driver’s license when she turns sixteen. She only has one very, very big problem in doing that: her father. [Short Story]
Author: Daisan [Jul 10, 2022] Genre(s): Cultural :: Crime/Gangster :: Other Details: Piece I'm working on that's part of a larger story. Of course I'm interested in technical things like formatting but I'm more interested in if the story is communicated effectively in the way it's told and if the tone (which is humor) is achieved. [Fiction]
Author: AliceLvs2Write [Jul 8, 2022] Genre(s): Friendship :: Mystery :: Women's Details: First time writing off a WDC writing prompt and would love some feedback on it. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: Avid Novel Reader  [Jul 5, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Crime/Gangster :: Action/Adventure Details: I've just written a short story for this month's official contest. I'd love any feedback you can offer so that I can improve it before the deadline at the end of July. Any help is much appreciated. Thank you! :) [Short Story]
Author: ruwth  [Jul 4, 2022] Genre(s): Personal :: Experience :: Biographical Details: Earn 1000 gift points from an auto-award item from my port. You can write a critique, offer a comment, anything you want. Simply read and write a response of some kind in the review box and earn your gift points.[Other]
Author: ~ShadowSilverMoon~🌌 [Jul 3, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other Details: I'd like some reviews on this item please. Any suggestions are welcome. [Poetry]
Author: SSpark [Jun 14, 2022] Genre(s): Psychology :: Family :: Emotional Details: This piece is heavily weighted in symbolism. I'm anxious to find out how hard it is to find and understand those symbols. All honest reviews gratefully accepted. [Non-fiction]
Author: ponkacheese [Jun 14, 2022] Genre(s): Writing :: Medical :: Environment Details: Enjoy and let me know what you think. =) [Poetry]
Author: green [Jun 10, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Opinion :: Experience Details: Hey, everyone,My weakness are the grammatical errors. My words flow but my punctuation stinks. I, probably, need help with all my pieces but we'll start with this one. Please be exact. Thank you so much, Stephanie [Essay]
Author: MWse [Jun 8, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Other Details: Hello, I'm looking for good criticism from all perspectives. The story is new so I can make adjustments If I know what to change. Thank you! [Novel]
Author: MysteryBox [Jun 4, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Paranormal Details: Newest short story. hitchhiking horror with a plot twist! [Fiction]
Author: Talia Foxtail [May 30, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Other :: Other Details: I am looking mostly for storytelling and flow. Its non fiction so I can't add much, but I can edit out if it doesn't work. [Chapter]
Author: Leslie Loo [May 21, 2022] Genre(s): Animal :: Children's :: Contest Entry Details: This is a story that I wrote six years ago. Check it out and let me know what you think. Also, tell me how I can improve the ending because to me, I'm not currently satisfied with it. Thanks! [Fiction]
Author: Cat Carroll  [May 12, 2022] Genre(s): Dark :: Supernatural :: Gothic Details: Hello! Please let me know if this works well or is too "fan-like" of Edgar Allan Poe's works. I chose to give those two well-known poems (The Raven & Annabel Lee) twists of my own along with my interpretation in a new poem. Thanks, dears! [Poetry]
Author: trolle [May 10, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural Details: Looking for feedback on this to help me strengthen the development of the romantic connection and characterization and information the next part [Short Story]
Author: Flower [May 5, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love :: Dark Details: This is my second poem, its about a toxic relationship, I'd love for some feedback, if possible. [Poetry]
Author: Daffodil Washburn [May 4, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Thriller/Suspense :: Action/Adventure Details: Hello! I'd appreciate any feedback you have to give me!(It's still a work in progress so if you have any helpful plot tips I would be beyond grateful!) :) [Fiction]
Author: Sand Castles Shopgirl 739  [Apr 23, 2022] Genre(s): Mystery :: History :: Other Details: Originally thought to be a preface, but am now torn between preface or chapter. This side story arose from a character sketch. The "parting gift" became a short story on its own. Not sure how to proceed here. Suggestions, please!! [Fiction]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Philosophy Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Cat Carroll [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Supernatural Details: Hello! This is my first attempt at prose poetry, a genre I adore. It's a horror/supernatural poem about creation, monsters, and something from within that engulfs us... Please let me know about its strengths and weaknesses :). Thanks! [Poetry]
Author: Larisa McGrath [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Young Adult :: Women's Details: If this first chapter is not a good hook, what can I do to change that? What would inspire you all to keep reading? What do you expect to see in a solid first chapter? I feel like something is missing, but cannot put my finger on what. Please help. [Draft]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Apr 7, 2022] Genre(s): Contest :: Dark :: Entertainment Details: An honest review would be very much appreciated. Thank you! [Fiction]
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